From Platitude to Tolerable: A Blog's Story (Meta-post)

When one is asked to reflect on their own writing, two things come to mind: 1) what one could improve and 2) what one's strengths are. Therefore, I would like to tackle both of theses as I assess myself with my final meta-blog.


Part one: Weaknesses


As I look at the past three blogs I wrote this quarter, I notice that I have written only three blogs. By writing only three blogs, I have basically failed this assignment. Through writing these blogs, I have learned to take the blame for stuff that I have done. It is my fault that I have only written three blogs. Last quater I would have probably blamed my lack of writing to being too busy, but luckily last quater I did not need to write a meta-post. This quater I have grown and take full responsibility for writing only three blog posts. 


I'm just not very good at transitions between points. 


Another weakness is sentence flow. I write very choppy. It does not flow. It makes my posts hard to read. I will work on that. 


Part Two: Strengths


I have finally mastered making my posts look pretty. Pretty posts and pretty pictures and a pretty font makes for a happy reader!


Writing about something I care about makes for a more fun read. You can sense the passion through my writing which, I hope, makes people think. In all three of my blogs I wrote about something I somewhat cared for. These posts flowed better, had better content, and informed people about something that they may have not been to aware of before. 


I have also found my voice (hence the picture of Ariel from the little mermaid because she lost her voice, but got it back after Ursula died). By being able to practice writing throughout the year I have been able to find my own unique voice when it comes to writing. I have been told by past english teachers that this is one of the hardest things to learn, and trust me, it took awhile. But I think, with a bit more practice, I could really have it down.


Before I finish I just want to say one thing. I'm very happy that I got to have a blog this year. I have learned that blogging is not my thing. But at least I got the opportunity to try it.


Oh, and please grade this lovely entry: If Rosebud Never Exsisted

If Rosebud Never Exsisted

In case you haven't been keeping up to date with my blogging (in which case shame on you) then you wouldn't know that lately I have been writing a research paper on federal spending for the arts. Through my research I have found out about the Federal Theatre Project (FTP) from the 1930's. Basically with this project, the federal government gave money to the theatre to help keep it going. As the director of the FTP, Hallie Flanagan said, "while our aim is to put to work thousands of theatre people, our more far-reaching purpose is to organize and support theatrical enterprises so excellent in quality, so low in cost and so vital to the communities involved that they will be able to continue after the federal aid is withdrawn." Ah, if only the world was perfect.

While this program was in place, they were able to support such people as Will Geer, Burt Lancaster, John Houseman, Sidney Lumet, E.G. Marshall, and most famous of all Orson Welles. In fact over the weekend I just watched Welles masterpiece, Citizen Kane, a film commonly thought as the best movie ever made. It's crazy to think that if FTP never helped Orson Welles when he was a young up-and-comer, then the world may not have ever been introduced to the artistic genius. The look of films today would look dramatically different without the influence of Welles' techniques.

The FTP came to an end 1939. I'm not saying that the government should start up a program as intense as the FTP, especially in today's economy, all I'm saying is that the government shouldn't cut spending all together. Without government spending, we may be depriving ourselves of people who have the ability to be as influential as Welles, but just don't have the means to do it. I know that we need to cut federal spending, but why cut the arts? after all we only spend .0051% of the budget on the art, why not cut the real money eaters like the defense budget, which we spend 16.3% of our budget. After all, as Jonathan Larson  wrote in his hit musical, Rent, "The opposite of war isn't peace; it's creation." 

Kevin Spacey, Alec Baldwin, and Tim Robbins. OH MY!

Actor Kevin Spacey

The government gave $124.4 million dollars to the arts in fiscal year 2006. Although it seems like a hefty sum, when compared to the entire amount spent in that same year, it only amounts to .0051% of the budget. And this was the amount we spent before the recession. Now the National Endowment for the Arts (NEA), the government organization for the arts, is in even hotter water because of the spending cuts and possible government shutdown.

According to this New York Times article, Kevin Spacey went to Lobby for the Arts on Tuesday. And as we all know, when a movie star starts to stand for something, then we know it's a big deal. Not only has Mr. Spacey called attention to this, but so has the actors Alec Baldwin and Tim Robbins. 

Throughout the Junior Theme process I've been uncovering why the Federal Government has been declining on their spending for the arts. This topic hasn't been seen much in the news, although it has been a problem since the late 30's.My topic has been becoming more relevant throughout the Junior Theme process. Sorta Cool.

I'm Not That Smart

So I've started this wonderfully, fantastic euphoric journey known as the Junior Theme. One book that I have been reading is A Whole New Mind by Daniel H. Pink. In short, the book is about how right brain thinking is becoming more and more important in society. While reading the book I've become more interested in how my brain works.

Of course I know that it's not scientific or official, but I decided to take an online test on weather I am right or left brained (If you would like to try click here). In the test I got pretty close to splitting even, although I lean a bit to the right side, which means I'm more artistic. Right brained people are also generally better at reading people's emotions, which means that they would be more successful in the fake psychic business. On the other hand, left brained people tend to be more analytical. These are the people who would make the best computer programmers.  

What ever side of the brain you tend to lean to, there are ups and downs for both. An example is that right brained people have more trouble with taking standardized tests like the ACT. The downside for left brainers is that jobs, like computer programming are being outsourced. Don't believe me? Read A Whole New World.

Because I am not completely right brained, I do not have a creative way to end this post. So I'm just going to finish.

A Change in Attitude

women protesting in Egypt

In class we commonly discuss stereotypes, in fact just this past week we listed all the stereotypes we see in the media of African-Americans. There are many other stereotypes then just that of the black people, but also of the studious asian, the nerdy jew, the non-english speaking latino, and worse of all the terrorist arab. 


The american view of the arabic people is that they are extremely sexist, extremely religious and extremely violent. When many americans picture the middle east they see car bombs, roadside bombs, people throwing grenade bombs or with bombs strapped on to them. So, if the american stereotype is correct, where were these bombs during the Egyptian protests? 


The fact is, the  Egyptian revolution was peaceful. The protestors were non-violent and just standing up against a government. What the Egyptians did went against the american stereotype. Our own revolution in the 18th century was a lot bloodier than in Egypt, so why aren't we seen as the violent ones (with how we deal with gun control our stereotype may just change).


Hopefully the Egyptian protests will change the american attitude toward Arabic countries and see that they are not violent terrorists, but just people.    

I Can't Finish

Today in AS we talked about why Mark Twain took a muli-year hiatus from writing the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn because he was not quite certain how to finish the book. I praise Mr. Twain for having enough willpower and gumption to finish his masterpiece of literature, because when it comes down to it, it's very hard to complete things. 


Why is it hard to finish? In Twain's case it was because he had so many different ending options to choose from. But let's say, for example, you were making a scrapbook. Seriously just go with me here. And let's say it's been roughly five years since you actually glued and pasted in there. Why is it that I- I mean you- can't seem to finish? Is it because of lack interest and importance, or is it just a pure absence of ambition? 


Not only are nonsignificant memorabilia projects hard to complete, so are other creative works. The Famous Composer Franz Schubert had trouble finishing his 8th symphony, otherwise known as the "Unfinished Symphony". Although he lived a few more years after writing the first two movements, he never seemed to be able to conclude it. Orson Welles  too left some of his films unfinished and Leonardo DaVinci's The Last Supper has some latin scripture on it that is incomplete. Finishing just seems like an hard

Why a Democracy?

This Morning I was lounging on the couch watching one of those Sunday Political News shows with my Mom. The hot topic was the revolts going on in Egypt right now. The host of the show was interviewing our current Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, who was talking about maybe installing a democracy in Egypt. I turned over to my mom, who was sitting to the left of me, and asked her, Why A Democracy?

Freedom of Speech
from Norman Rockwell's Four Freedoms

Sure Democracy, or rather more of a republic, has worked out great for our country. I feel that, although not everyone in pleased with the people who are in office, they are at least pleased with how our country is run. Democracy is the government that works for the U.S. and many other countries, but would it work for every country?


In some countries, the democratically elected leader is hogging the office. In 2005 Palestine held a democratic election and elected Mahmoud Abbas to presidency. Abbas has lived out his full term, but has yet to step down from office. And in Iran, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad was also elected in 2005 and reelected in 2009, although many speculate the authenticity of the results. Part of being in a democracy is giving the people a voice by voting and allowing them to choose a new person to take control . But in some countries that person elected takes over and democracy just doesn't seem to be working anymore. 


Although Democracy is a good government, is it for everyone? Are there better options out there for other countries? To be honest, I don't know.

Thoughts on My Slightly More Fascinating Than A Platitude Blog

If my blog was food,
it would look like this

Looking at my past blog on my blog, "My Blog: A Platitude", I have defiantly improved. I am no longer Vapid, arid, and at times irksome, but rather just sometimes insipid. 


Especially when I talk about stuff that actually matters. For example my blog about taking the N-word out of Huck Finn called "Neglect". I must admit that it is one of the few blogs where I talk about a hot topic in today's society, but the blog entry is so bromidic and stodgy.  Yes I have a view on this topic, but I am not passionate about it, therefore my word choices are about as spicy as a saltine cracker. In "My Blog: A Platitude" I said that I should try to focus more on topics I care about because it makes my writing stronger. But the fact of life is that I'm going to have to write about topics I could care less about, but I still need to make them entertaining. So, I believe I have found my thing to work on this next quarter.


Another thing I struggled with was being able to keep my voice but still get my "important" point across. My voice in writing is generally comedic, which can be a gnarly thing or an abominable thing. Probably my worst blog entry was "How to Spot an Impostor", which only talks about how I am untrustworthy (which, trust me, does not further society). In it I sound like I try to hard to be funny, which pretty much means that it was not funny. It's just a heinous blog post, 'nuff said. But when I do not put in humor, such as with my post "It Comes With Time", it still ends up wretched. Another thing I need to work on is to find the a nice in between with humor and intellect.


Which leads me to the blog that I would like to be graded, titled "Meh". This blog is both humorous but insightful at the same time. This post makes me feel like a modern artist. Each person who comments see's something different within the post. Weather it is just me making fun of the OED, commenting on modern day slang, or talking about how we don't just communicate with words, everyone seems to have a slightly different take. And I like that, I'm making people think. 

Morality Stages on Stage

In Class we talked about Kohlberg's Stages of Moral Development . The highest stage is stage 6, which is when you do what you believe is right and face the circumstances. Supposedly a person to reach this level of morality is very rare, but not when it comes to entertainment.


Today is rehearsal for the school musical, Les Miserables, I was thinking about the choices that the characters make. An example of the rare souls at stage 6 of morality are the student revolutionaries. (in case you did not know, this musical takes place during the French Revolution) These students were willing to fight for their rights and except the consequence of possibly dying.


 SPOILER ALERT!


All the students end up dying, well all except for pretty-boy Marius. This got me to thinking about how so often in entertainment we see characters who exhibit stage 6 tendencies.


 One of my favorite movies, Mulan, is about a women who was willing to enter into china's imperial army as a man, despite the fact that if she was found out she would be killed. Despite such a gruesome consequence, her morality buzzer was buzzing that it was the right thing to do because her father was to old to go back into the military.
The reason that we are entertained by Stage 6 characters is because they are rare, and isn't rarity something fun to watch?

Life With Out Theatre Teachers

The Mona Lisa was painted
by Leonardo da Vinci

Awhile back in class, Mr. Bolos said that the one teacher his daughter had the strongest connection with, her chorus teacher, was laid off. Not because the teacher was not talented at inspiring students, but simply because funding for the arts just wasn't there. Sadly this is not uncanny in today's world.

When Mr. Bolos said this is really struck a chord with me. My favorite thing to do in the whole world is to act and I am very close with the 4 theatre teachers at my school. If I did not have the support of these teachers I would feel lost. I'm glad that my school has the money to keep the arts running because if it didn't I would never have discovered my passion and I would not feel talented nor special.

Constantly in the news I hear about how public school have been shutting down their arts programs leaving hundreds of children unable to find their talents and passions. The art world is slowly declining because art education is not being taught in schools. Just a few weeks ago in another class of mine a girl could not answer who it was that painted the Mona Lisa. We need to keep the arts in school, they are an important outlet express ourselves and I know my life would not have been the same without the support of my theater teachers.

It Comes With Time

Today, in American Studies, we looked at illustrations from various time periods of the character Jim from the book the Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Through these pictures our class could catch a glimpse of how many people in the US felt about black people.  We saw Jim turn from an ape like man with bats in the belfry hair in the 1920's to just a normal looking person that we see in today's books. The further along we got in history, the better representation Jim had in the illustrations. 

This pattern of having a better reputation as time goes along is a very common one. For example Honest Abe did not have the highest acceptance rating while he was in office. but, looking back today, we view him as one of the best presidents in our history. And there was also Vincent van Gogh who was a  starving artist with a tormented soul during his life, but today he is infamous for both his artwork and for cutting off his ear. And I can not forget about my favourite Christmas film, It's a Wonderful Life, which was a flop at the box office but a timeless classic now. 

So basically, with time comes a new perspective. Our hindsight allows us to view things differently. And who knows, maybe someday this blog will be famous, but not until the future. 

How to Spot an Impostor

This is not me,  Although I wish I had his hair

In class we talked about the credibility of a person. Often, the more you trust a person, the more credible you find them. So I am here to tell you, that although you may think of me as a trustworthy person I am not credible. why? Well let me tell you.


1. I cite Wikipedia all the time. If I were an expert in a subject I would probably cite a more creditable source, like my new medical journal all about chinchilla pancreases, but instead I cite a website where anyone in the world can change the subject at any time. 


2. I write very informally. If what I was saying was actually credible I would not be cracking jokes right and left. Although I think they add a nice touch...


3. The title of my blog is An American Ignore A Moose. Let me show you how to pronounce it. An...American...IgnoreAMoose. If you still do not get it basically it's called An American Ignoramus, and as we all know from the little golf tee game at Cracker Barrel, we should never trust an Ignoramus.


So now you know that I am not an impostor trying to look like a journalist or expert on chinchilla pancreases. but rather an anonymous person writing a blog. 

Neglect

French Jewish people outside of Vel' d'Hiv
during the round up.

Over our Winter Break, one of the novels I read was Sarah's Key by the talented French writer Tatiana de Rosnay. The book is about how during the WWII the french police rounded up the Jews living in paris and ultimately sent them to their death. This event was called the Vel' d'Hiv Round up. Even more interesting to me was that today many french children are not taught about this tragic event in school. Through not teaching them about the round-up, it is almost like this part of history did not exist.


While reading this book I kept on thinking about how this would never happen in the US. I thought that we  teach our past mistakes, so that we can learn from them in the future. Boy, was I wrong.


In case you have not heard, I new edition of the Mark Twain classic, Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Will sensor out the "N-word" and replace it with the world "Slave". The reason for doing this is to protect our youth from such a dirty word. I do understand that, but to me this is just covering up a bad part in the american history.


Only a few confused people who find pointy white hats still in fashion can deny that slave ownership in america was a dark time in our past. Although slavery is hard to learn about, we must  learn about it in order to not repeat our mistake. The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn can teach us about the time in history when people used the "N-word" freely and, in the south at least, found very little wrong with slavery. We should not neglect our past by censoring out a word, but rather learn from our past, even when it is difficult. After all, who do we want to be like? The French?